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Did someone call my name? - Words sell, Writing good copy


On tonight's conference call, as I often do, I asked people to tell the others about

the products or services they market.

Without hesitation, we all heard:

“We have a really great drink that has all these vitamins…”

“Our company markets wellness products…”

“We have a health care program…”

“Our company, EXTRAFINEST, has the cheapest phone service…”


The busy brains of the listeners asked the usual question about any statement within earshot:

“Did someone call me?” “Is someone calling me?”

Realizing this, I immediately asked the group: "Did anyone here feel like they were personally being spoken to with any of these statements? That it was addressed specifically to you??

Uhh. Hmm.

“Did someone call me?”


Why would they respond if they don’t realize they’re being called?

How do you get someone to pay quick attention, short of calling their name?

How about describing them some other way?

How about these descriptions?

Mothers Against Drunk driving.
Cancer Survivors
Pet lovers
Catholics
Wine enthusiasts

These describe certain people, yes? You think if you were to put out a call for all 'Mothers Against Drunk Drivers' Would members recognize themselves with that call and respond?

Almost as if you had called them by name?

Interesting, huh?

How about we apply the same principle to the products and services (next time, the business) you market?

You know, describe the kinds of people who are predisposed to what you market so they ‘hear the call’.

Look at the words used on the call:

“We have a really great drink that has all these vitamins…”

“Our company markets wellness products…”

“We have a health care program…”

“Our company, EXTRAFINEST, has the cheapest phone service…”


It's all about THEIR COMPANY and THEIR PRODUCTS.

Do you hear yourself called with those words?

Let’s describe different kinds of people and see if by doing that, we can ‘call’ them.

This drink is for “people who are sick of choking down 9 pills each day”

Would people ‘who are sick of choking down 9 pills each day’ know who they are?

Do they need therapy to learn about the virtues of nutritional supplements?

They’re already taking lots of pills, actually. So are they predisposed to your proposition a bit? Will they hear the call for themselves?

Let’s try one more.

Instead of “Our company markets wellness products…”

Which calls no one in particular, how about calling this group?

Our product is for “people who are going crazy because they just cannot sleep through the night. Back aches, overheating, you name it. They're ready to try about anything.”

Does that describe a group of people in the US? Think they’d 'hear the call' if someone called out to them, and asked for them?

Go ahead and try to make the other two statements more meaningful to the right people. Just select one group, like I just did. One group described and called for, at a time.

“We have a health care program…”

“Our company, EXTRAFINEST, has the cheapest phone service…”

For more information on finding customer prospects who are predisposed to your products and services, check out chapter 17 in the book "Do You Have a Plan B? Guide to an Alternative Career in direct Sales and Network Marketing"

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